Sunday, May 13, 2012

While Reading -The Plot Whisperer- by Martha Alderson

I love to read books on craft. I have many of them, and continue to marvel at the ways these books weave advice about writing in so many ways and yet all hope to get a writer to the same place.  Right now, I am reading THE PLOT WHISPERER by Martha Alderson.




The book opens with an introduction which begins, Something urges you to pick up this book.  And from there she begins to write not just about writing craft, but about our humanity and who we are in the world. Alderson describes how the stories we write, and things we put our characters through, speak about who we are as human beings.

I teach the Universal Story to writers through plot. Though difficult to accomplish successfully, plot is critical to stories. As I continue to teach and write and consult, I gain new insights into plot... and into writers' lives. 

She goes further to speak about the things that we struggle with as writers and the things that block us and how we should dig deep when these pop up in our writing because some baggage in our real world there needs to be unpacked and dealt with.

This is not to say that a murderous villain's actions are speaking to the author's experience. She's talking about the deeper stuff. The conflicts, the motivations, the juicy meat that makes a story universally relatable.

Alderson talks about energy, and the Universal Story that we all strive to come into contact with. And how our ability to tell a story that speaks to everyone will be dependent on how we approach the world as a left- or right-brained person, or both. AND THEN... she tells you how to do it. *yay*

Look what happened when I finished the one of the exercises:


That's my book there on my wall, all laid out in blue postie notes. I've been working hard to get my final round of rewrites completed so I can get this baby out into query land and have been having issues with that first little downhill jaunt up there. Postie note number 3 and 4 after the crisis peak were causing all kinds of havoc on everything that came after.

Posting it out like this, as the exercise advised, I was able to move through and solve the problem and have become completely jazzed in the process. Above all the things, being jazzed again about this book has felt GREAT! Granted, I have a whole lot of work ahead of me, but that is also part of the journey.

I got so excited I grabbed my husband and made him come in to see the fabulous plot poster, but insisted that he didn't actually READ any of the notes because he has not read this final draft yet and some of the juicy bits have now changed. So he admired my blue story structure plan and congratulated me and then left the room with me grinning like a starry eyed maniac.

When I started writing this book, I did so without a plan. I had it in my head where I needed to go and I went. Once the first draft was finished, it was okay. I was enamored of the process and realized my story went in a few directions I hadn't intended. Many drafts later, I am still paying for that lack of planning as I rework some stuck spots and solve the larger issues of plot. Above all things, I have realized that I require a plot plan.

And that little pink postie in the lower left corner? That is the start of another line of my story about to be explored and added to the six foot postie mural. I have green and orange tags waiting to go as well. The exercises in this book are done in such a way as to help you see your story to its fullest completion. My plot poster will be a kaleidoscopic adventure of bullet points when I am done.

Ms. Alderson wrote this book especially for me. She had to have. I mean, my goodness, the woman is speaking my language. Since finding her book, I have also found her blog and see that Ms. Alderson has all kinds of stuff going on that I have been MISSING! Go there after you go to Amazon to buy her book.

Have you already discovered Martha Alderson? What say you? 

Friday, May 4, 2012

Meet Author Susan Oloier +WIN a copy of FRACTURED

Today I am excited to have my friend, Author Susan Oloier, visiting the blog! Susan's new novel FRACTURED was released just this week and is enjoying a blog tour and giveaway to celebrate!  Follow the book tour here and enter the giveaway below.


About FRACTURED:
When Anna Kincaid has a miscarriage, her world comes crashing to a halt. Grief overwhelms her life and she combats it with prescription medication. Her husband Lloyd does not see the event as tragic. In fact, not ready to be a father, he is relieved at the news. This creates a chasm in their marriage and splits them apart. Both Anna and Lloyd find themselves moving in different directions. Anna finds hope in a young, male colleague named Ben and comfort in narcotics. Lloyd loses himself in work. Will their marriage survive the miscarriage, or will it always remain fractured?
Reading about this story, readers learn quickly that it isn't based on a happy event. Right away we meet Anna Kincaid and witness her experiencing the loss of her pregnancy. What inspired you to write this story?
FRACTURED came from my own miscarriage experiences in 2002. Initially, writing the novel was a way to cope with the pain of a loss few understood. But I quickly realized I couldn't create a fully-developed story based on miscarriage alone, so it became more about a broken marriage precipitated by the loss of a pregnancy.
Tell me about the journey from idea to novel.
FRACTURED has been ten years in the making, Though it was not the first novel I wrote, it took a lot of time to get the first draft completed. Then life events took me away from novel writing: the birth of my two sons, my graduate degree, a teaching job, a gig as a magazine columnist, small publishing credits, and eventually a year-long road trip to visit the national parks in the lower 48 (another story that is already six years in the making). I've revised, rewritten, and edited FRACTURED though the years, I dusted the manuscript off again and worked to get it in shape for publishing.
What made you decide to go with Indie Publishing?
In 2006, my younger son was born with Trisomy 18, an often fatal diagnosis. When my husband and I were told he would likely die before he reached two months, I made a conscious decision to truly live my life in the moment. Then in 2011, my sister-in-law died in a tragic car accident at 36. These two moments, along with other major events in my life, made me fully aware that I may not have tomorrow. So why wait for the glimmer of hope from an agent of from publishers? I've racked up hundreds of rejections over the years even though I know I write well. An excerpt from FRACTURED was published online at www.thefertilesource.com, which validated what I already knew about my work. It's a personal decision, and I chose not to wait for traditional publishing, especially in the face of an ever-changing industry.
Susan, thank you for being so candid about some truly heavy and personal things in your life and your writing. Reading FRACTURED, one can't help but notice how real and honest you were in sharing the experiences as they unfolded for Anna. I know many readers will relate to Anna and her story because she is portrayed with such clarity and depth. The journey to publication is truly ever-changing.  Best of luck to you, and I hope you find success and lots of new fans through FRACTURED.
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Monday, April 30, 2012

#atozchallenge - Z for Zymurgy

Hooray!  I made it!  Thank you for sticking with me on my A-to-Z Challenge adventure this month.  What fun it is to blog daily about strange and wonderful words! I have enjoyed meeting so many new blog friends, and still have so many blogs to visit on the list of over 1800 participants! 

What's next... I need something to happen for May and beyond!  I heard rumblings of a mother's day hop.  Stay tuned...

For now, I leave you with:

Zymurgy
/ˈzīˌmərjē/
Noun: The art and practice of fermentation in brewing, wine making, or distilling.




I have a list of things I want to learn in my life, and this is on it. I would like to thank the zymurgysts of the world, and especially our friends in Dublin, for all their hard work. And now that we're here, at the end.... what better way to close and celebrate this month's blogging achievement than with the pinnacle of beer greatness.

My 2011 post: Z for Zeugma

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Something that makes you sad.  

A video response:

The A-to-Z brings so much activity that it is hard to keep up the daily blog once it's done and the Z post is published.  But regularly blogging will ensue for sure.  So, like the mouse in the video below, this is the end... but not really:


Hope you'll keep coming back!
Peace.

Saturday, April 28, 2012

#atozchallenge - Y for Yankees

*yawn* Holy cow the A-to-Z challenge is exhausting!  I know several bloggers who manage more than one blog and are doing the a-to-z on all of them... yoiks! 

As a Bronx kid, it must come as no surprise that today's Y word is:

Yankees
Noun - fabulousness.



Did you know they started in Baltimore?  It's true.  See all the details here.

I could go on about the Yankees... but... it's Saturday and there is a party going on in these parts.  I am actually on my way to a fundraiser where we will be bidding on CAKES!  Hold me back!

My 2011 Post: Y for Yclept

What's cool about posting last yaer's words is that I remember almost all of their definitions! Never stop learning people!


Today's #photoadayapril prompt: 1PM
So, my world at 1pm was surrounded by people in uniform:






Friday, April 27, 2012

#atozchallenge - X for Xenium

TGIF!!  X is such a strange letter, and all the words that begin with x are sadly relegated to such specific places in discussion. While researching X words for you today, I discovered that most of the words that begin with xyl have something to do with wood.  Like, xylan which is a gelatinous compound found in wood. Or xylem, the woody portion of a plant, and of course xylocarp which could only be hard and woody fruit.  Who knew?  Not I.

And so it is with pleasure that I give you a non-woody word for X today, consider it my gift to you:

Xenium
zee'ni-um
noun: A compulsory gift. Also a present given to a guest.



Growing up, whenever we would go to a party or any gathering of family or friends, my mother would insist that we never arrive empty-handed. We would stop at a bakery for a box of assorted cookies or the liquor store for a bottle of wine.  As an adult today, I find myself doing the same thing. Rare is the occasion that I would go somewhere and not bring something. Who knew there was a word for this?  From now on I will make a point of stating that I am leaving a few minutes early in order to pick up my xenium.

My 2011 Post: X for Xesturgy

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Somewhere you've been
We took an RV trip to CA and read all about the Donner party as we came through this part.  *shivers from the cold (and the story)*

Thursday, April 26, 2012

#atozchallenge - W for Wordicuffs

Welcome to W day! It is also Thursday and you know what that means... HAIKU!

There is a serious lack of fun and wacky words that start with W. And so, I was quite pleased when I discovered the one below. I have no idea if this is even a real word, but knew when I heard it that a) it should be and b) I had to share it on W day! 

Wordicuffs
noun: fighting with words


some of the best scenes
are when movie things go there:
molten wordicuffs


So, while searching for an insulting movie clip, I found one that is incredibly NSFW. Go to YouTube at your own risk: The 100 Greatest Movie Insults of All time. 

My 2011 post: W for Widdershins

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Black and White


Wednesday, April 25, 2012

#atozchallenge - V for Velleity

Did anyone out there see the movie Limitless with Bradley Cooper? I think often about that scene where he partakes of the miracle pill and sits down that night and finds the inspiration he's been seeking and writes an incredible book in one sitting. Yeah... I think about that a lot. ;)  

Who knew there was a word to describe all the other days, though... you know the ones, when the ideas don't come easy and everything feels impossible?

For today's V post, I give you:

Velleity
/vəˈlēətē/
Noun: A wish or inclination not strong enough to lead to action.


Sometimes all you can do is hope the sun rises tomorrow on a day full of oomph. And when that doesn't happen, well, that's why God invented naps.

My 2011 post: V for Veritable Blog Awards

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Looking Down



Tuesday, April 24, 2012

#atozchallenge - U for Uxorious


Hey there U, it's U! How are U doing? Happy U day everyone, to celebrate, we're going to talk about this little gem I found this morning: 

Uxorious
/ˌəkˈsôrēəs/
Adjective: Having or showing an excessive or submissive fondness for one's wife.


http://www.someecards.com
Uxorious... I am not sure this is something desirable. I mean, on one hand it sounds ab fab to have a husband totally dote and hang on your every desire, need, and word.  Who wouldn't want to know their spouse was truly that attentive? But in reality that begins to cross the line into stalkerdom, no?  Perhaps balance and moderation here is what's best for us all in the fondness category. I love you, see you on date night.

Also, what does it say about the world that there is no word for the reverse? Don't wives have or show excessive fondness for their husbands? Hmmm.

I totally adore someecards.com. The gift of being able to say many of the say things out loud that I would only dare think in my head... and do so with such style and panache.  *sigh*





My 2011 post: U for Ugsome

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Something you're grateful for

my mini peeps!




ecard image source: http://www.someecards.com/miracle-whip-cards/love-dating-friendship-distaste-miracle-whip-funny-ecard

Monday, April 23, 2012

#atozchallenge - T for Turveydrop

Howdy do! I have been slaving away at my writerly edits today, and now that I have finished (for now) I can get to the really important stuff, which is today's word for the #atoz.

Any Dickens Fans out there.  Me ME!  *waves hand*

Turveydrop
Noun - a perfect model of deportment and behavior
from Mr. Turveydrop, in Dickens' Bleak House

Oh, when I saw this word I was brought back to pages of Bleak House. A ginormous read, and a rather amazingly crafted tale for its enormity and overlapping weave of a story.  If you have not read it, I can recommend it or its audio version as well. Just a magnificent book.  I remember learning about the Chancery Court that is a central part of this story, and how Dickens' description of the workings of the court were fairly true to form. (Which is not good.  Scary, even)





Within the tome, we come upon Old Mr. Turveydrop.  He is a self-proclaimed "model of deportment" and in fact, spends every waking moment strutting around like a preening rooster and posing in perfect stances, working at all times to improve and display his impeccably manners and flawless appearance. Of course, in reality, he is a complete ass and an oblivious leech. Living off his son, named Prince Turveydrop, who ekes out a living running his little dance academy in order to support his useless fop of a father.

My 2011 Post: T for Telary

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: vegetable




Saturday, April 21, 2012

#atozchallenge - S for Synchronicity

Happy Saturday!  It is day 21 of the #atozchallenge and boy are my typing fingers tired. I had a great short list of bizarre S words from which to choose today, but opted instead for a word that I absolutely love:


Synchronicity
/siNGkrəˈnisitē/
Noun:  The experience of two or more events that are apparently causally unrelated or unlikely to occur together by chance and that are observed to occur together in a meaningful manner. The concept of synchronicity was first described in this terminology by Carl Gustav Jung, a Swiss psychologist, in the 1920s. (from wikipedia)



I remember reading The Alchemist by Paul Coelho and being absolutely blown away by the notion that when a person chooses to follow their personal legend, the Universe conspires in their favor.  How awesome is that? To have The Force as a guide when you're on the right track?

I don't think it means that you need to find that one single thing that you're meant to do on this earth and only then will you find this synchronicity. I think it is simpler than that. I think your personal legend can have a billion facets and acting on any one of them can cause "chance" and "God" and "the Universe" to fall into place for you, to bolster you and give you a glimpse of possibility.

I also think it is important to pay attention in order to capture these moments and realize them for what they are.

So, it is all just coincidence, or is there something bigger at work? 



My 2011 Post: S for Simplicity

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: bottle


Friday, April 20, 2012

#atozchallenge - R for Resipiscence

Take a trip down memory lane with me, would you?  One of the soundtracks of my childhood is Donna Summer.  I so wanted to be her. I can picture my sisters and I playing the record over and over on this one night, but for the life of me I can't remember where we were. The room was a study in brown. With shag carpeting. And paneling. The Donna Summer Album was hot on the charts...  Whenever I think about the 70s, I think about the Son of Sam (the .44 caliber killer!) disco music, and Donna Summer. 

Resipiscence
(rɛsɪˈpɪsəns)
Noun - acknowledgment that one has been mistaken



When she knew she had made a mistake, Donna Summer sang these words over and over again (with Barbara Streisand) in a fabulous and somewhat resipiscent song called No More Tears:


Enough, is enough, is enough
I can't go on, I can't go on no more, no
Enough, is enough, is enough
I want him out, I want him out that door now

Sounds to me like someone has seen the light...


My 2011 Post: R for Riffle

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Something you drew.
So, playing draw something and the word was DISCO... I had to give Donna her due. Writing this makes me want to head over to iTunes for some shopping.

The Disco Diva Herself


Thursday, April 19, 2012

#atozchallenge - Q for Quale

Howdy blog readers! Today is day 19 and that means we are on Q.  It is also Thursday, which means we've got a HAIKU!  Here is my Q Haiku, for you.  *ahem*

Quale
\ˈkwä-lē, -ˌlā\
noun:  1 : a property (as redness) considered apart from things having the property : universal
2 : a property as it is experienced as distinct from any source it might have in a physical object

That one is a bit hard to get my head around... but it is fun to say!


If you don't know Spock
you can still appreciate
the quale of coolness


My 2011 post: Q for Quarry

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: orange
This orange was plucked from a tree in AZ by my very own hand :)  The pic brings me back to a fab road trip with a friend that started with, "So, I have this crazy idea..." <3


Wednesday, April 18, 2012

#atozchallenge - P for Polyphloisboian

It is P day in the a-to-z and that is starting to feel so close to the end. Where has April gone?  I found a doozy for you today... from our old friends in Ancient Greece:

Polyphloisboian
[poly-flo-isumptin sumptin O_o]
Making an incredible racket; anything that makes a terrible noise.


I remember when this movie came out and I wished I could hear what Carolanne heard. "They're here..."  Not so much anymore.  Might not have been an incredible racket, but it was certainly a terrible noise.

I found one site that gives a neat talk about polyphloisboian and states a literal translation from ancient Greek as "heavy-thundering".

Living in a house full of young kids, I could probably find ways to weave this word into my vocabulary on a daily basis.  "Stop all that polyphloisboian activity this instant!"  That might stupefy the spawn into a ponderous silence, followed by the giggles.

My 2011 post:  P for Petard

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: hair
Me, hiding behind mine:


Tuesday, April 17, 2012

#atozchallenge - O for Oneirophrenia

Once one ogles our obviously obscure occurrence of orismology, one ought omit over-thinking. Opting other offerings of O.

Sorry, I couldn't help myself.  It must be the drink talking... Oh...

Today we have the delights of:

Oneirophrenia 
o·nei·ro·phre·ni·a (ō-nī'rə-frē'nē-ə, -frěn'ē-ə)
noun:  A mental state that is characterized by hallucinations and other disturbances and is associated with prolonged deprivation of sleep, sensory isolation, or psychoactive drugs.





My 2011 Post: O for Overjoyed

Today's #photoadayapril prompt: Something you don't like



Monday, April 16, 2012

#atozchallenge - N for Nepenthe

Guys... we're already past the halfway point in the #atozchallenge!  I spent 99% of the last week offline and have missed my blog time. I'll be catching up this week and hope to visit all you all on your blogs.

For today we have the nifty letter N:

Nepenthe[ni-pen-thee]
noun - a drug or drink, or the plant yielding it, mentioned by ancient writers as having the power to bring forgetfulness of sorrow or trouble.


I'm sure Luke and Leia were wishing for some nepenthean concoctions after all was revealed! Writing that I am reminded of my high school days when the lives of Luke and Laura on General Hospital were all that mattered. Perhaps we all need some nepenthe after that.

I've often said that if I could wake up with a matrix-like download of information tomorrow I'd like to have a complete knowledge of botany. It might be useful to have the ability to create nepenthe on demand.

My 2011 Post - N for Neologism

Today's #photoadatapril prompt: flower
Some African violets in my kitchen this morning.